A Dream
The sun was through the window as Nadia put her pink and Green sweater over to cover her eyes. 14 year old Nadia was eyeballing her teacher, listening to her favorite part of history. The holocaust. She was imaging what would it be like to be a Jew back then.
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Your introduction in a good start. It hook a little bit.
I understand what was going on, because of the description.
The introduction didn't really introduced the problem.
I think by improving your work you should add more descriptive informations. By the way, it was a good start. Keep on rocking it!!!
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